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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 4 September 2015

What have I been doing this week

For this week what I have been learning in literacy class the first one I learnt was a book called the white truck.The book was about a Samoan family living in a small village, There was a little girl and boy name Timu and Moana. They where on a mango tree talking about stuff and eating mango's, so they keep talking about stuff then Timu saw a white truck with palagi people in it. Then they both where watching them get out of the car and saw them went walking in to Moana's house and going to get Moana's sick mum. Her mum had this disease called Lurposy, she was effect with that and got even more sick. Then Moana ran down fast to her mother and said to the palagi people to dont take her mother then the palagi people said that they have to take her oversea's. Then the Moana let her mother go then the people tokk her on the back of the truck and left there village, Moana said to Timu crying that she misses her mum and then they both went in the house and did something to make Moana fell better.



Other thing ive learnt in literacy in writing is how to prevent your self from getting sick. So Room 5 literacy have to write 3 paragraphs of how to prevent your self from getting sick, ive wrote a a whole paragraph of the writing so here is the writing. Keeping warm is another way to prevent yourself from getting sick. I’m gonna write about how to prevent yourself from getting sick so the first  thing to make you prevent yourself from getting sick is keeping warm on cold weathers. So to keep warm in cold weathers is to put on some pants a nice a warm jumper and some socks.


Then when you are sleeping at night try have 2 blankets on and maybe a hot water bottle, and wear some gloves if you have some but if you dont then rub your hands together and it might get warm, for an example it like the samoan thing that they go something like they say me meli meli meli.

Then that's when they rub there hands nice and fast and hard. Thats a example of rubbing your hands together is to do that. That’s one thing to prevent yourself from getting sick is to keep warm. 

Wednesday, 26 August 2015

How to prevent yourself from getting sick

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Room 5 literacy where learning about How to prevent yourself from getting sick, and here is a paragraph I did about this activity we did. 
Keeping warm is another way to prevent yourself from getting sick. I’m gonna write about how to prevent yourself from getting sick so the first  thing to make you prevent yourself from getting sick is keeping warm on cold weathers. So to keep warm in cold weathers is to put on some pants a nice a warm jumper and some socks. Then when you are sleeping at night try have 2 blankets on and maybe a hot water bottle, and wear some gloves if you have some but if you dont then rub your hands together and it might get warm for an example it like the samoan thing that they go something like they say me meli meli meli then that's when they rub there hands nice and fast and hard. Thats a example of rubbing your hands together is to do that. That’s one thing to prevent yourself from getting sick is to keep warm.

Tuesday, 21 July 2015

Term 3 Immersion Assembly.

Yesterday on Monday the 20th of july 2015 we had a Immersion Assembly on the first day of term three. Our Topic for this term is Trade & Enterprise, Trade & Enterprise means that the way you Trade,Buy or sell the stuff like an auction how you sell rare stuff or stuff that you think it looks cool for you and then you bet the amount of money you want to spend to win that thing you want from the auction. So this morning at the Immersion Assembly Mr Bert was doing an auction for the kids, the kids have to bet the most to win the prize that Mr Bert is auctioning. There where teachers in costume to do something for the performance for what they're doing for this whole term. At Immersion Assembly each team has to do a preform for the whole school about what they are gonna do about the topic for the whole term.

My favorite team performance out of the whole Immersion assembly was team 4. Thier one was about a boy sometimes have problems when he needs help. He has emotions that help him with the stuff he is having trouble with, His emotions were Extra happy,Calm and Sassy. It was like the movie called inside out, inside out is a movie that a girl has emotions that are in her head. Her emotions were called fear,Anger,disgust,sadness and joy. So back to team 4 performance, They were all of his emotions that helped him with stuff that he had trouble with. It was funny that Sassy was acting like what girls do sometimes when they talk to each other, it was so hilarious he made me laugh really hard. That's why that my team performance because it was funny.








Tuesday, 16 September 2014

Continents Punctuation



We have been learning about how to use punctuation in our writing,This is my one.

Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Use my brain Use my heart Im going to be cybersmart

In assembly Mr Burt was talking about our new korero called use my brain use my heart i'm gonna be cybersmart. Mr Burt made that korero because people were doing the wrong thing on their netbooks and being too much playing music.

Use my brain means when you use your brain if you're being dodgy on your netbook. You listen what your head says and you have to go on the right thing and you be cybersmart.


Use my heart is when your feelings feel sad or worry or feel guilty that you should not be on something that you are not aloud to go on. Because if you are not on the right thing you will be on the detention at lunch time.Thats just sad because you don't get to have fun outside with your friends and enjoy your whole day to like school.



Cybersmart means you are being cybersmart that you are doing the right thing on your netbook and finishing your work off. Its good to be cybersmart because some teachers call you it because you're a good boy or girl be kind to kids and be a good friend two others. Cybersmart will help you with your learning and your whole kindness at school to be cybersmart.

So when your at school use your brain use your heart your going to be cybersmart of your learning.

Tuesday, 26 August 2014

Explaining My Event

Soccerbasket is a made up game that was created by Maysun Schaaf. It’s going to be played in the 2018 Commonwealth games. The aim of the game is you have to kick a soccer ball in to the basketball hoop.


The Equipment you need is a basketball hoop, your team shirts, shin pads and a soccer ball.  You will need a basketball court sized field with grass on it to play on.

Your team will have 10 players on the field who have different positions. They will play attacker, defender, striker, goalkeeper or center. The rules are no tripping other players,no pushing,if the team kick the ball out the other team get a free kick.



We have been learning about our made up game and Explaining my event.

Culture Punctuation





We have be learning about Culture and punctuation

Monday, 4 August 2014

World War 1

This morning we had a special assembly to remember the people that were in the World War 1. We were looking at some World War 1 photos of some army and the countries that were fighting in the war. Mr Burt and Mrs Flavell’s grandads were in the war, and we saw a photo of them with their army clothes on. Mr Burt told us to look at the big screen and we would see the NZ flag rising up the flagpole. When it got to the top it was going to be lowered to half way to show respect to the soldiers who died. There was bugle playing The Last Post. When assembly finished Mr Burt asked us to go back to our classes quietly.

I have been searching about World War 1  and I found these facts out.

World War 1 facts  

The first world war was in Europe it started on 28 July 1914 and went until 11 November 1918.

100,000 New Zealand men signed up to fight in the first world war.

In the world war 1 16,697 Kiwi soldiers were killed and 41,317 were wounded.

Maori soldiers first serve in World War 1 with the New Zealand Army.