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Monday 10 December 2012

Writing for an audience

Maysun worked with some friends and his teacher to edit his paragraph. We wanted to add details and vocabulary that would keep an audience interested!

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  1. Dorothy20 January 2013 at 19:23

    Aloha and Happy New Year.

    Mr Burt and I are looking at your new blog from Hawaii where we are on holiday.
    If you look on your world map, on the left side out in the ocean you will see a red dot. It is showing you that we are visiting your blog from Hawaii.

    We are looking forward to seeing what you post on your blog this year.

    Have a wonderful year in Year 5.

    Mrs Burt

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