Creative Spring Writing

Today in class we have been doing creative writing. We had to write a sentence about this picture. As a class we chose the sentence we liked to best and then added to it. Here is my sentence and the sentence I added to.

In the beautiful spring I can smell the nice nature and flowers, and I see the very sunshining sun.

Under the oak tree,kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light  on you. I relax watching the children on the with an awesome view of spring.